高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；多多加强句法知识；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，另外文中有较多拼写错误；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Play football is my best habbit : Once by chance make me to like football, I am pick a football in a go home way ,and than I play football with my friend ,we have a good time. now that I love the football and like to playing football . offere get train and have a math with my classmate we are most love the footballstar is beikehammu and become aprofessional football player is my bigger willing