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高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:08浏览次数:6604
要求:
文明的举止在国际交往中非常重要,因此提高国民修养势在必行。近日,你班就本话题进行了热烈讨论,请据以下要点给某英文报写一篇120字左右的短文,表明个人观点。
1. 提高国民素质的必要性;  
2. 列举你所观察到的一些不文明行为(两种以上); 
3. 就此做出评论,并提出建议。  
参考词汇:behave  v 举止、行为、表现  spit  vi 吐痰    
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

The civilizable behaviors Nowadays, more and more people ignore the civilization with the association is developing quickly. Nonetheless in my opinion, civilization is the most essential quality that people should have. Someone likes smoking in public or speak to their acquaintance loudly. In fact, I think these manners are rude and impolite. Everyone is supposed to respect other persons whenever and wherever. The civilization is so necessary for a man or a woman that everyone should pay attention to it. While you are doing some impolite behaviors in public, maybe other persons who are stay with you will fall unhappy and despised. Sometimes not civilizable conduct will make your friends or your partners look down upon you. Polite and civilizable manners can show our high quality, and I really hope that everyone in our world can treat others politely, so that we can be more civilizable!

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