高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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Playing football is my favorite sport.When I was seven,by chance I picked a football on the way to go home.And I played football with my friends untill the sky was dark.I thought I had never played such sport that could make me happy and excited.It was then that I liked to play football. Since that,I often played football with my neighber.At school,I made many friends liked to play football.And we had some training and matches after class.Besides,I joined football club to learn some difficult actions and skills.I have been runing every morning to make my body stronger. NowI am a senior high school student.My favorite football star is Beckham.I believe that if I don't play football I would be short of happyness.So as far as I am concerned,I hope to be a professional football player.I will strive untill the dream is achieved.