作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇。
Nowadays, many people are crazy in taking part in the exams of different kinds of certificates. A survey shows that a growing number of people are having exams to get the certificate ,such as ACCA, CFA and so on. Different people have different aims towards the exam of various kinds of certificates. Firstly, it is efficient for them to gain competence in workplace. Secondly, the process itself seems as an opportunity for people to learn somthing related with their carrer. Thirdly, many students in the college wish the certificate could be a plus when they search for a job in the market. For me, the exam of lots of certificates will spend much time myself undoubtedly. In fact, a lot of them only play a role in special area, however, we ,as a student , are not sure which career I will have. Therefore, I will concentrate myself in studying the basic theories, knowledge and cognitive law, at the same time , I will spend a good proportion of time to participate in the exams of different kinds of certificates.