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Dear George, It was my pleasure to receive from you,your letter indicated that you want to know more about the household hotel which are in my hometown.I 'll tell you the details as particular as possible. The price must be the significant thing that you want to know first.The single room is 30 yuan each day and the double room is 40 yuan each day.Of course,dining with the family for only 20 yuan.You can also cook by yourself if you don't want to order.Taking part in activities like sea-water bathing,mountaineering and swimming if you like is extraordinary.Not only the culture of China can you learn about with staying there,but also you'll feel at home. That's all I know about the household hotel in my hometown and I'm looking forward to your coming. yours, Li Hua