高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化。

Dear editor with the time goes by,more and more family have their own car.It's use for go to school,park and office.And the car not only have advantage but also have disadvantage. At first,having your own car make the transportation more convenient and comfortable. And the,it also can save time for you.If the country have many car in the road,maybe the country's economic is strong and develop fast. What's more,buy the own car can influence business and others that need have a fast transportation. However,the more car in the road,the more traffic accident will be happened.when the many car in road,the car will go slowly and slowly.while the car become more and more,the gase will be terrible. Besides,the park also be used up quickly. In the end,i think each of family should think carefully before they decide to buy their own car. Yours, Vike