高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

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Dear editor With the time goes by,more and more families have their own car.It's used to go to school,park and office.And the car not only have advantage but also have disadvantage. At first,having your own car make the transportation more convenient and comfortable.And then,it also can save time for you.If the country have many cars in the road,maybe the country's economic is strong and develop fast. What's more,buy the own car can influence business and others . However,the more car in the road,the more traffic accident will happened.When the many car in the road,the car will go slow.If the car become more and more,the air will be terrible. Besides,the park also be used up quickly. In the end,I think each of family should think carefully before they decide to buy their own car. Yours, Vike