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2003年1月英语六级作文真题:关于诚实

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:23浏览次数:997
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实

用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇基础不错,在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉,要加强拼写;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Current social witnessed a phenomenon that a variety of dishonest have been arising from all walks of life.Regretfully,quite a lot of enterprises and pesonalities take it for granted.Unbelieveable and funny as they sound,this behaviour can been seen and heard eveywhere in our country.For instant Adminstration departement assure to perform there tasks fairly without taking any bribes.But these are just nonsense.Companies should have producted goods of good quality,however,there are many fake products in the consumption market.As a matter of fact their just want to put on civilized outer closing to deceive the public. I dare say that the society is suffering cheat which are causing damage to society both materially and morally.As we all know that by dishonest words no one can survive the intense competition.they should remember the old saying ,Honest is most important than anything else.

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