高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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Everyone have their own hobbies so am i.I fell in love with play soccer by chance.I still remember that day up to now. It is a sunny day,while i finished my class and go to home with my friends.I saw a very beautiful globe on the floor,i pick it up.And play it with my friends.We spent a wonderful time.Because of this i love it deeply.So i always practice it after class.And join in the march with my classmates. My favorite soccer star is Beckham,i think he is a people who is nattest man in the world.And i hope one day i can become a professional soccer.