高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Playing soccer is one of things that I love best. I fell in love with it all by chance.Once I got a football which may be someone lost.Then we played with it.Since then I was deeply in love with it.Now I always practice playing it and take games with my friends so that we could improve our skills. Of all well-known football stars, my favorite soccer player is Beckham who is extremely cool when he is playing football.I exercise hard in order to become a professional football player that is my biggest dream.