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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
This pictures describes a typical phenomenon that the two people have different in views about a bottle of water is drop in the floor.The optimism think it is have a little water but pessimistic people think it is over.I think attitude is extremely important to sovle a problem. This is thought-provoking picture.Attitude occupies an important position in the successful things.facing in the trouble ,different people have different in attitude,the pessimistic people Will give up .. but optimism will spare no effort to solve the problem and to achieve the goal.I think nothing is more important than to have a good attitudes. The harder you work, the more progress you make.All in all,no matter what you faced tremendous problems,you should keep good attitude. As far as I'm concerned we should try to learn anyone who have a good attitudes,when we faced problems.no matter how difficult to do in my life,we should keep a good attitudes to face it. Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
