高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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in the past , there were many trees around our countryside , a lot of fishes played with each other in the river , the houses were simple ,the streets were narrow ,but now , having a greet change compared with past , such as ,many buildings and factorys stay up , all kinds of cars gallop in the street everywhere, ithe evirenment of historys become worse , trees are reducing and fishes are dispearing .so it is most improtant for us to take some messages in protecting envirenment