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英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写邮件

发布时间:2013-05-23 22:10浏览次数:14151
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说明:假定你是胡斌,根据下列内容写一封邮件。 
发信人E-mail地址:hubin@163.com 
收信人E-mail地址:KPOHsales@hotmail.com 

内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。

【高频词句】 
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书 
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系

用户的作文(系统评分88.5分
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作者词汇量积累不错,学术词汇积累较少;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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There are many different points for JUFE to reduce the water pollution. The most important thing is what we can do to appeal to students to save power and water. In afforest, JUFE can use recycled water to water grass, which is already a popular practice on many colleges. What is more, lawn might not need the automatic sprinklers to come on twice a day. As a result, we can water lawn once a day to reduce water and electric consumption. Secondly, at student apartment, in order to shorten the shower time, JUFE can install shower times with red lights which stipulate the time that is allowed to take a shower. After that, we can also ask JUFE to install half-flush toilets at all dormitories that use less water. Thirdly, we can build a system that encourages students union to drop into dorms, classrooms and offices and check the position of tools to protect from wasting water . After that, student union can set a reward mechanism, which system can encourage students to check the water recycling or provide a nice idea to reduce pollution. In my opinion, with the development of the smart phone, we can not only use our phones to connect with our parents and friends, but also download a useful application to build a system to protect our environment. This application just likes Sina micro-blog, which can spread information rapidly for those users. First of all, students can learn something about reducing pollution such as some pollution prevention tips that can be used generally in our daily life. Second students can write some blogs and take some photos to show JUFE pollution problems. Then application developers will mail JUFE and ask them to solve those problems. Finally JUFE press corps can reach an agreement with application developers and report outstanding blogs to encourage students take part in this activity. In this way, students are encouraged to do their utmost to make contributions for our environment. In a few words, people should be educated to recognize the importance of the problem and use modern methods to protect our environment. We are sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future.

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