2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者词汇量积累不错，学术词汇积累较少；作者在句法层面做的很棒；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

There are many different points for JUFE to reduce the water pollution. The most important thing is what we can do to appeal to students to save power and water. In afforest, JUFE can use recycled water to water grass, which is already a popular practice on many colleges. What is more, lawn might not need the automatic sprinklers to come on twice a day. As a result, we can water lawn once a day to reduce water and electric consumption (An Mei, 2009). Secondly, at student apartment, in order to shorten the shower time, JUFE can install shower times with red lights which stipulate the time that is allowed to take a shower. After that, we can also ask JUFE to install half-flush toilets at all dormitories that use less water (Jared Skye, 2010). Thirdly, we can build a system that encourages students union to drop into dorms, classrooms and offices and check the position of tools to protect from wasting water (Hong Lei, 2009). After that, student union can set a reward mechanism, which system can encourage students to check the water recycling or provide a nice idea to reduce pollution. In my opinion, with the development of the smart phone, we can not only use our phones to connect with our parents and friends, but also download a useful application to build a system to protect our environment. This application just likes Sina micro-blog, which can spread information rapidly for those users. First of all, students can learn something about reducing pollution such as some pollution prevention tips that can be used generally in our daily life. Second students can write some blogs and take some photos to show JUFE pollution problems. Then application developers will mail JUFE and ask them to solve those problems. Finally JUFE press corps can reach an agreement with application developers and report some outstanding blogs to encourage students take part in this activity. In this way, students are encouraged to do their utmost to make contributions for our environment. In a few words, people should be educated to recognize the importance of the problem and use modern methods to protect our environment. We are sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future.