2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；从句使用很不错，再接再厉。

As the old saying says ”Where there is a will, there is a way ”,we can’t success unless we have a strong will. Actually, just like the saying “Quitting smoking is the easiest in the world, I’ ve done it hundreds of times” not only for quitting smoking,but all succeeds need a strong will. Noting succeeds without a strong will. For one thing, as we all know , it’s not easy for us to success because the way to success is far more difficult as we expect . since those people who have a strong will can hold their dream and try it again and again. For another thing , a strong will can give us power and courage when we want to give up. Sometimes if we try one more time,we can get the final success and see the bright future . As far as I am concerned, no matter what we do, we must have a strong will so that we can have confidence and courage to win the final success.