2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；可适当增加从句的使用。

There is a old saying ”Where there is a will, there is a way ”, it means that we can’t success unless we have a strong will. Actually, just as the saying “Quitting smoking is the easiest in the world, I’ ve done it hundreds of times” not only for quitting smoking,but all succeeds need a strong will. Nothing succeeds without a strong will. For one thing, as we all realize, it’s not easy for us to success because the way to success is far more difficult as we expect. Since people who have a strong will can hold their dream and try it again and again. For another thing, a strong will can give us power and courage when we intend to give up sometimes. Sometimes if we try one more time,we can gain the final success and see the brilliant future. As far as I am concerned, no matter what we do, we should hold a strong will so that we can have confidence and courage to win the final success.