作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
There are many kinds of sports that I like ,such as playing basketball ,swimming ,running. But my favorite sport is playing football. Once by chance ,I picked up a football in my way to home,then I played it with my friends. And from then on, I love football deeply. Now ,I often practice football with my friends, and we usually have a match.How the football is! My favorite football star is David Beckham who is from the United Kingdom.His skill is wonderful! And my greatest wish is to be a professional football player in the future.