字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,学术词汇使用过少;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
As we see in the picture,the bottle is in the floor,and some milk is warn out. One people think that all gone bad,and other take the measure rapidly and think that fortunately there are little. The picture tell us that we will meet so many difficult problem,different people have different measures . Some are optimistic,then they would find some other routine to deal with the problem,they think about the problem is the good thing. The other people will think about the bad thing,they complain that the thing have gone. One word that one's attitude about the problem decide his future. In my opinion,we should learn the measure that the optimistic people takes. In our life ,we may meet the challenge,however what we meet ,we must face it optimistic.if do that ,we have had success.