2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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In the world ,the education is very improtant ,if you donot have good education ,you cannot looking for a high slary job . Accroding to statistcs that the education and income are proporational , if you diploma are higher ,it means you slary is high and unemplyment rete is lower. From the chat we see that if you are doctor degree ,you can make more moeny , it reveal the improtance of education There is no doubt ,if you want to get high slary ,you must learn more knowledge