2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

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Midi is China's largest outdoor music festival , with rock music as the main content.In this research, the Midi Music Festival as a case study, using participant observation, depth interviews ,text analysis and other research methods, considered the Midi Music Festival as a culture production.The research borrows Bourdieu's concept of "reproduction" and field analysis method, and puts it in many multi-field analytical context such as culture, power, politics, country , to learn how the Midi Music Festival producer / actors operate and manufacture the Westernized lifestyle cultural activities in the transformational modern China.