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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。
At present, people are talking about many parents do everything for their children's problems. Pitiful world parents heart, any time, parents are always strain every nerve to give your children the best of everything, in the eyes of parents, we will always be a child grow up, this is we can't face independent of society. We all need to face a lot of things independently, in order to let the children to be independent, first of all, parents should give children a chance to contact society, so that they learn to adapt to social life. Secondly, parents should let the children choose their dreams, do a suggestion rather than the operator. I think our own attitude is also very important, in daily life, we can listen to the views of parents but don't rely on their parents to let them do everything for us. To do the masters of their own, is to get out of the ivory tower to be independent of parents!
