2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文中学术词汇不足；文章层次较为清晰。

Let the Kids Be Independent In the picture the parents in tears are bidding farewell to their son at the airport.The son，sitting in the plane,cries out to his parents,"Mom and dad,you forgot to find a nursemaid for me."Judging from the parents'openmouthed and wide-eyed expression,we can tell that,on hearing the words,they are shocked and embarrassed. It seems that the parents are sending their son to further his study far away from home.However,the son is not ready at all for an indepandent life.By showing this scene,the artist wants to warn us that pampered children who grow into dependent young adults won't stand on their own feet.For example,some parents rent an apartment near the campus to cook and clean for their children in college,which turns out to be harmful to their children.Once leaving their parents,they can hardly make a living of their own. therefore,it's of great importance for children to become independent.On the one hand,parents should give their kids chances to do their own things.On the other hand,the young adults shoud learn to refuse their parents to baby-sit them.