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Sponsor of the marathon obtain economic benefits by using of the phenomenon that "run for charity" concept has become firmly rooted in the hearts of the people, sponsoring well-known game to improve their awareness, and building a well-received image in public. In addition, large enterprises sponsored charitable activities are very popular, in the United States, companies are even forced to sponsor part of the funds to a variety of charities, and sponsoring such a large charity event is more appropriate. London Marathon this mature,traditional charity event has a very broad market.
