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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6297
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章层次较为清晰;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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In the current society, people's desire for money becomes more and more deep, which seperates our friendships and makes us lack in trust with others. Because of the lacking of trust, it happened a lot of things that are not supposed to happen. For example, food safety, pollution, and so on. The necessary things'quality we use can't be guaranteed, result in people's dissapointment for society and governments. As governments, it's time to take some measure to avoid the phonomenon expanding. Thereby, we should strengthen the efforts to educate the generations and firm their belives of money and power, we can also organize some activities about money and power to form the right value.As parents, we should also make children form good habits on mataining trust on others and pay attention to their attitudes towards them,correct their mistakes in time.We children are supposed to treat our life actively. To build a happy and harmonious society, it is very important for us to trust others.

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