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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6292
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。

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In the current society, people's desire for money becomes more and more deep, which separates our friendships and makes us the lack in trust with others. Because of the lacking of trust, it happened a lot of things that are not supposed to happen. For example, food safety, pollution, and so on. The necessary things'quality we use can't be guaranteed, result in people's disapointment for society and governments. As governments, it's time to take some measure to avoid the phenomenon expanding. Thereby, we should strengthen the efforts to educate the generations and firm their belief of money and power, we can also organize some activities about money and power to form the right value.As parents, we should also make children form good habits on maintaining trust on others and pay attention to their attitudes towards them,correct their mistakes in time.We children are supposed to treat our life actively. To build a happy and harmonious society, it is very important for us to trust others.

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