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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596[网页划词已开启]
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分63.0分
评语:

句子错误偏多,建议修改;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者能较好的使用一些学术词汇,同时要避免个别拼写错误;请注意分段。

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listen to a conversation between two students,they are both studying to be english teacher did you register already for your classes next semester,yes i did,what do you taking ?em contemporary literature,english style , a teaching similar and i still have to do my students' teaching,i am gonna help teach a writing class of junior high that's a heavy schedual,yeah it would be really buzy ,and i am also taking a theory class,i gonna have to quite my job in couple of weeks because it would be just too much ,where do you work at?master's coffee shop .but just to the end of month,what are you doing next semester?actually a teaching similar too,and i'll have to start writing my phases, you know i am also going for my master's degree,so you are not writing any poetry i imagine,no i was actually thinking about revising some of my poems and sending them into places for publication,cool ,you should ,did you hear about that new poetry club , the poetry katchen?yeah ,no time,it's fun at sunday night,it don't do anything sunday night .i do homework sunday nights,well it's only from seven to nine,is it every sunday?last sunday every month,i don't know about this month cause it is probably too close to thanks giving ,so they might move it off i don't know what they gonna do but it's a good time it's fun,some really impressive readers who ?from our class?some people from our class are reading,a lot of them go sometimes even the professor, really i don't know if i want to read in front of her,you don't have to read ,you can just watch, i just watch the first time,it's a good environment to reading i think anyway i prhobably have to write something new,so maby during the summer i just can't now,yeah it wouldn't be the same just reading old stuff,will you have to do the summer school? definitely,otherwise i would be short six credits, i have no choice,yeah me too,this is the second summer i have to take the classes,gonna to go now ,my shakespear class starts in twenty minutes

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