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My school is very open and beautiful.There are many trees and flowers.We have many buildings.For example,teaching building,swimming building,library and art building.Our playgrand is very large.We all like our playgrand all most.My school have many teachers,greast teachers.I love them very much.And we have many students.They are my good friends!There are some music rooms and art rooms in the teaching building, too. The teachers in my school are very kind . The students are very polite and smart. I am happy in my school.