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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6007
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分41.0分
评语:

正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

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My school is very open and beautiful.There are many trees and flowers.We have many buildings.For example,teaching building,swimming building,library and art building.Our playgrand is very large.We all like our playgrand all most.My school have many teachers,greast teachers.I love them very much.And we have many students.They are my good friends!There are some music rooms and art rooms in the teaching building, too. The teachers in my school are very kind . The students are very polite and smart. I am happy in my school.

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