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recently the ministry of education has been collecting opinions on the possibility and feasibility of ending the separation of science and arts in high schools , which arouses a heated debate among people . different people have diefferent opinions . supporters think that it is beneficial for students ' all-round development and separating students into science and art leads in liberal art students lacking science spirit and science students not concerning about social problems .however , opponents hold the view that ending the separation of science and arts will add more studey pressure and students are different . in my opinion, it is good news for high school students .first ,they don't need to wonder which subjects they should choose to learn or abadon . second , i don't think it will add their study burden because they can choose one subject to take exam .actually , it reduces their pressure .
