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dear sir , my name is liming ,an outgoing boy and i'm writing to apply to be a volunteer of the olympic games . i know you're selecting voluntary english translators. i have a keen interest in the position . i graduated from anhu universty majoring in english and i like sports . i am ready to help others . i think i am suitable to do such a job. i want to contribute to the olympics . i would appreciate it if you would consider my application. best wishes . liming
