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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
学术词汇的使用希望还能更熟练一些，拼写检查还需加强；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段。
The picture shows that the rate about unemployment and degree.It is easier to see that the higher degree you have,the harder you were unemployed.As for median weekly earnings,professional degree is the top. Though this data,it is emphrased how important the degree to us.For us ,I think no one want the poor life, isnt it? So this is a warning to us ,if we want to change our life,that we have to study to alter our life.The university life will make us lazy,but we cannot kneel for lazy from ourself.We need to fight for what matter to us.nowadays,the burden for employment is the stone in our heart.So we have to study for it ,in realisty
