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2012年8月19日托福独立写作真题附范文:汽车和飞机的影响力

发布时间:2013-06-06 13:14浏览次数:1029
要求:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"Cars (automobiles) have greater effects (influence) on society than airplanes." Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;可以适当增加副词的使用。

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 Conflict resolution is very important. The technique is the same whether it's between people, between groups, or between nations. You need to find a common ground; you need to learn what both sides want; and you need to plan steps to resolve the conflict.   Finding a common ground is the first important step in any conflict resolution. For example, if two countries are fighting, a mediator could do what is the single thing that both counties are concerned about. One answer might be their children's future. Agreeing on the future of their children is an important first step.   The next step would be to try to determine what both sides want for their children. For example, Country X says, “Security from Country Y.” Country Y says, “Security from Country X.” Obviously, they feel threatened by one another.   The third step is to plan steps to resolve the conflict. A mediator might ask what would make each side more secure: Stronger borders? Increased trade? Smaller military forces? Once the steps are established, the peace process has begun.   I don't mean to imply that this is easy. Resolving long-term disputes is not simple. But the process can be broken down into three steps (common ground, needs, steps to resolution) and then repeated and repeated until there is peace.

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