2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

The following is an essay for English writing class IA131B. The title of the essay is China and pollution: what can be done? I have broken the essay up into three parts in order to provide a clearer explanation of what can be done to help reduce pollution in China. The three parts include what the individual can do – in this case, what I can do – to what JUFE can do, and finally what China or the Chinese government can do to help reduce pollution. As you read the following essay you will come to discover that although China is a very large country with approximately 20% of the world’s population, we, as a nation, and I, as an individual, can and have been making great efforts to reduce pollution in our country.