2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As far as we know,more and more education attention have been paid by parents.it is reported that education pays cut down .we analised the median weekly earningsin2001.it showed that some unfair pays so l think we should change the previous way to pay for the education .in order to balance our socity normals it is high time for us to do something.