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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

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With the rapid society has brought unprecedented transformations in humans' life,there is no denying that more and more people opt for leaving parents living.Rightly so,however,still,a great many people select to live with their parents. The phenomenon due to the following reasons.To start with,typically,they have more free time,do they what they want.Besides, many people,meanwhile,helping parents because they want to feedback,perhaps more importantly,if parents have ill,they can strive to look after them. From my perspective,I hold the view that we should live with parents.Firstly,we can look after each other.What's more,family,make us more warm.In a nutshell,the family is crucial to us. Only in this way can we get a happy life.

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