题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用。
Trust is the most frequently used word when we are talking about personalities.However,it is difficult to build trust but easy to destroy it.Thus,it is important to build and maintain trust for us. As far as I'm concerned,there are several methods to do.Firstly,we should keep our promise forever unless the situation we confront is emergent.Secondly,we should build trust even if facing the trifle.Last but not the least,if we break the promise,we are supposed to apologize to others sincerely and demonstrate the cause carefully. Building and maintaining trust is of great benefit to us,thus we should try ours best to do that.