2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Where there is a will, there is a way. As the old saying goes, a strong will is an important guarantee of success. Nothing succeeds without a strong will. Only the one with a strong will can he accompany the great mission. Life is always full of frustration. If you don't have a strong will, you can't go on with your dream. As we all know, only try your best with a strong will can you forget to give up and try yourself all the time. Whatever trouble you face, you just need to insist on walking ahead instead of giving up. Only go ahead with a strong will can you go to the end with a mission not only accompany but surpassed. As a student, it is necessary for us to build a strong will. Only study hard can we be a useful talent. Being in trouble, there is no point retreating or giving up. Only rose to the challenge with a strong will will you succeed.