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With the development of living standard,there are increasing number of families who own at least 1 car and use it,whose behavior contribute to high rate of traffic jams. To solve this problem,some people suggest that the utilization of cars should be restricted,especially in inner city areas.In this essay,I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this way.