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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17583
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨;文中一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活,但请注意单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I'm sure to accept the statement that snap judgements can never be trusted.First,believing in snap judgements will cause bad effects.I'd like to point out that a decision that hasn't get past the precise checks will invite something beyond imaginations. Judgments ,especially snap ones, can only be treated as predicaments.People who believe and practie such judgements will never take the responsibilities if the judgements are wrong ones.If a business snaff take the sanp judgements on dealing with financial issues, they will have a high rate of potential bankrupcy.Besides,snap judgements can not stand for a long time.Judgements need facts to support them so that they can pass the tests of time.The aim of doing hundreds of thousands of experiments when trying to solve a scientific problem is to build a factal foundation on judgements.Scientists do so to get a mutual trust between the researches of the same field and himself. At last , I think everybody should think twice before he trys to get a conclusion .A person can only receive respects and trusts from others if he do gaurantee the correctness of his judgements.

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