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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；熟练使用了一些长难句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Badminton in my country is very popular. If you go to China, you can see many people playing the game and you can see many young people playing badminton very well, because when they were children they often play this game with their parents or brother. The government supports this game because this is China’s most popular a game, the government can to pay money to building a badminton court so people can go to the beautiful building to play game together. And sometimes the government will to make a badminton games, the prize and all things is government to pay(money). Of course, the government will invite the badminton stars to play, in China the best player is Lin Dan. He will to teach people how to play a good badminton. (Victor and updated, 2014.) The badminton game also can strong your body and your legs. In badminton you should often to jump if you jump you can hit the ball so, those who often play the badminton will have very strong legs and he can jump very high. If you play badminton you should swing your arm and your back and your arm will be very strong and can movie very quickly your vigilance will be good, because the ball often flies at you, you must be very quick to hit it. If have some things fly to you maybe you can very quick to catch it or avoid it. (Sports
