2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,more and morepeople like online shopping. It has become such a very populary shopping way that it is arousing the concern of the entire society. As is konw to everone. Online shopping is good for us. Fist of all, It reduce times to go to the stree on shopping. Moreover, the things are cheap than the shop. However, also has some problem, for example, you don't konw that whether or not you want. little by little reduce people communicate. In my advice, reduce people to online shopping times. take with firends go shopping on the street. look at the beautiful world.