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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活，词汇拼写要仔细检查；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Last several years have witnessed a phenomemno regarding the previously invisable conection between the computer using and colleges.As the picture protrays,The averange time of utilsing net in 2002 was 7 times than that in 1990.In 1990,Student in universitiy were just waste two hours on computer.A clearly correlation suggested that undergraduates are surferring threatens addictted to aritificial intellegence. There are a great many reasons responsible for the aforementioned tendency.Firstly,with the quickening spice of comtempory economic,Computers in growing number are made,so people who are not haves can afford it.Moreover,great impotance have been attached to machians because it is really useful and convenient for us to obtain knowledges. As a university,I believed that computer do good than harm.As the old thing:each coin has two sides.On the one hand,messenges provided by computer are verious.If we take good use of it, we can make it transfered treasures.What's most radical thing we should do is to make appropriate choice.
