2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有些单词拼错了。

Should Parents Sent Their kids to Art classes? There are more and more parents choosing to send their kids to art classes.Such phenomenon leads to a hot discussion about whether it is a right thing or not.Actually,different people hold different view with different reasons. The people supporting to send kids to art classes mainly have following reasons.For one thing,sending kids to art classes helps kids to improve their ability as wel as make kids'life colorful by contacting various knowledge.They consider the art classes a new way to konw about the world.For another,sending kids to art classes is a nice choice to spend kids'spare time.People insist that,instead of wasting time playing computer games,they prefer kids to have fun with art.However,there is still a great number of peoplewho concerning more about the negative effects, against this phenomenon.To begin with,they think it difficult for parents to really understand what their kid want,so they will easily make their kids suck in somethings they hate.In addtion,in their view,children are supposed to enjoy their childhood with their peers rather than shoulder more burden. As far as i am concerned,just as each coin has two sides,sending kids to art classes both have its positive and negative effects.What we should do is to send kids to art classes under the circumstance that they make the decision by themselves.