题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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1.对这种做法有人表示支持文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Should Parents Sent Their kids to Art classes? There are more and more parents choosing to send their kids to art classes.This phenomenon leads to a heated discussion about whether it is a right thing or not.Actually,different people hold different views on it. The people supporting to send kids to art classes mainly have following reasons.For one thing,sending kids to art classes helps kids to improve their ability as well as make kids'life colorful by learning knowledge.They consider the art classes a new way to know about the world.For another,sending kids to art classes is a nice choice to spend kids'spare time.People insist that,instead of wasting time playing computer games,they prefer kids to have fun with art.However,there is still a great number of people who are concerned more about the negative effects, against this phenomenon.To begin with,they think it difficult for parents to really understand what their kid want,so they will easily make their kids confused with something they hate.In addition,in their view,children are supposed to enjoy their childhood with their peers rather than shoulder more burden. As far as I am concerned,just as each coin has two sides,sending kids to art classes have its positive and negative effects.What we should do is to send kids to art classes under the circumstance that they make the decision by themselves.
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