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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17604
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

snap judgments can not be trusted fully. To begin with,snap judgments may lack of facts as its reasoning basis.The conclusion may be drawn by feelings that without any creditable evidence.If you trust snap judgments,you may considerate things fully and make big mistakes that can not be made up of.Moreover,you can not risk making a decision without seriously considerations. On the contrary,some believe that snap judgment can be trust. For such reasons as follows.First of all,snap judgments can be made by people's instinct.Secondly,they get such judgments form his or her own experience. To sum up,snap judgments can not be trusted.

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