托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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I always believe that perseverance makes people stronger. First of all,we cannot finish tasks as perfect as we can as long as we try our best to do it. Secondly,there are many things we cannot change at first,however,we carry on and have faith in ourselves we may get what we want at last. Thirdly,I always believe there is a will,there is a way.If I don't make efforts and just give up so easily,I may get nothing at last and comfort myself that I just lack of luck and chance.But,in fact,I make excuses for my laziness.Though the process of failing makes me feel distressed,but in the meantime,it makes me more tough and more willing to take challenges. Last but not least, you may regret what you give up but others persist.They get what they want by hard work. At last,no pay no gain.Perseverance makes people stronger.