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字数：300 满分：100分
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LI a WuDang school's master hand who decided to give up his warrior life and ask his friends Yu,actually they loved each other,but they can't live together,to transport his Green Destiny sword to thier friend Sir Te.Xiu knows Jen stole the sword who is a potential genius in swordplay.Jen has been study Wushu since she was ten years old from Jade Fox who is a bad woman and murdered Li's master.Jen's father once worked as office in Xinjiang and in there Jen meet her Mr.Right a handsome cateran whose name is Lo.Before Jen's wedding,Lo ask her to go with him,but Jen refused him.Nervetheless,Lo is very perverse,he intending to carry off Jen in wedding.Though Jen haven't go with Lo,she disappears in that night and again stole Green Destiny.Jen plans to go around the world by her own ability but she failed.
