托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

I always believe that perseverance makes people stronger. First of all,we cannot finish tasks as perfect as we can as long as we try our best to do it. Secondly,there are many things we cannot change at first,however,we carry on and have faith in ourselves we may get what we want at length. Thirdly,if I don't make efforts and just give up so easily,I may get nothing eventually and comfort myself that I just lack luck and chance.nonetheless,in fact,I make excuses for my laziness.Though the process of failing makes me feel distressed, in the meantime,it makes me more tough and more willing to take challenges. Last but not least, you may regret what you give up but others persist.They get what they want by hard work. To sum up,as far as I am concerned,no pay no gain.Perseverance makes people stronger.