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字数:300 满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中从句数量过少;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
This film through a wuxia story reveal the cultural and emotional wisdom.There are many meaningful lines."There are crouching tiger and hidden dragon in social,and so as human heart's.""The things we can touch can't forever.""Hold hands,there is nothing in it;Loosen the hands,you have everything."In my opinion,the crouching tiger and hidden dragon have two means.First,it means emotion between Li and Yu.Second,it refers to Yu and Luo.Besides,the Buddhism and Taoism principle in this film are also worth to research.