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What we feel about happiness will change with the increasing age.Because we will have more experience as we got old,so we become more and more mutaul.There is an experiment show that the youth regard excitement as happiness,to the other side,the old regard peace and satisfaction as happiness.That to say we have different comprehension about happiness in different age. The childhood,we may think that happiness is have someone to play with,have something to eat and never blamed by parents.How simply it is? In ten years old,as we get growth,we have a little more request about happiness,we think happiness is have a good grade and prized by teacher. At teenages,our happiness is changed with our age,besides expect a good grade we want to be popular amang the group we are in and furthermore,desire to love somebody or loved by someone.And meanwhile,we begin to think about life and world and feel confused about it. After we obtian employment and get married,our happiness is more realstic.In our opinion,happiness is get a little progress in job and family is peaceful and health. And then we get into old years,and we also become knowledge and wiser.And happiness is simplier than before.The happiness in this time more similar to happiness in childhood,but it is appearance not inside. No matter how old we are,we should enjoy the life and find the happiness in life with sincere heart.
