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字数：300 满分：100分
文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
In this time,we are in the college.our money from parents.we shuold save our money. however,in some parts ,we use money necessarily. at the informer age,teengers have go through a high speed life .they like fresh thing and alwaya change their out-date thing .they always buy some extra things that don't need.i think this money can be save.if we have enough clothe,we don't have to buy more .it's weast.as a student,we must buy exercise books ,that is a fear we must pay for.we want a wonderful feture,we must work hard and study hard,so the money spend on education is necessary. in conclusion,we should have a wise mood for use money.when spend money and where spend is important .
